My name is Shiloh I am a year 6 in Whetu. I love to bake my favourite colours are Green, Blue and purple.
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Letter to my Mum and Dad
This is my letter to my mum and dad hoping that they had a great year and a fab Christmas. I chose the colour blue because my mum and dad ...
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This is my Fab finish. I did Sunny. A Descriptive Passage and a More About Me. I think I could have done better because it was to colour ...
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Keys of Survival Finding fresh water Listen to these tips to find good water. . Dig a hole about 2 feet deep and you can drink t...
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I loved the year 6 cycling trip. It was challenging but I did it. In the middle of the cycling trip, we stopped and seen a waterfal...

You have a great start here, Shiloh, what could you do next to make this an overflowing jar of honey? Just remember to proofread your writing before you post - getting a buddy or expert to help you would be the best way to do this.
ReplyDeletethis is a great start and I love that you tolled me something about it
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