Once there was a rhino he loved all things happy one day he got taken away by a big truck. He fired were or what was taking him away from a perfect life at home the grass tickling me thinking about it made me sad. I tried not to think of it but that was on my mind I was so sad I drifted off to sleep. When I woke up I was at a place could the Zoo there were big cages with Rhinos in them I was so scerd I seen rhinos everywhere I hoped that I was not going to be in one of those cages but the man drove past all the cages and took me into this place on a stag I thort it was a circus but what were the rhinos in cages for then the sine said practising rhinos I thort it was not a rhino zoo after all it is a circus.I was happy but I still missed my oner in Afrace but I seen someone in the crowed it looked like MY ONER she came running after me it was going to be a happy ending for me and you.
My name is Shiloh I am a year 6 in Whetu. I love to bake my favourite colours are Green, Blue and purple.
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Ok Shiloh I think it's a great blog but I'm pretty sure Africa is spelt wrong but I love it great blog.
ReplyDeleteWhat a crazy experience for a rhino! Just remember to double check your writing or get a buddy to check for spelling and punctuation before you post.
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