This is my Chapter Chat this week I did my dream jobs. I did it because in the book Stanley and all the boys where talking about what they would like to do when they leave Camp Green Lake so that is where the task came from but they changed it to what we would like to do so I did Baker and Cabinet Maker like my dad but I would like to be a baker because it is my passion. I loved doing this task.
Nice job Shiloh this looks amazing. It also looks like you put a lot of effort in it.The only thing is that I think you need to put more full stops in your writing. Other then that great job and keep the good work up for next week. P.S. I like how you said how it was related to the story because it gives the people reading it more information. Tayler
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DeleteThat is amazing Shiloh.
ReplyDeleteWell done, it looks great! I like how you chose out of two jobs. I agree with Tayler that you need to put more full stops in your writing. Ella
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have chosen to show your two dream jobs, Shiloh, they both look pretty interesting! Well done checking your writing for spelling and punctuation, it is awesome!!
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ReplyDeletevery good detail Shiloh and you put heap of afect in to your leaning. Riley
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