My name is Shiloh I am a year 6 in Whetu. I love to bake my favourite colours are Green, Blue and purple.
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Letter to my Mum and Dad
This is my letter to my mum and dad hoping that they had a great year and a fab Christmas. I chose the colour blue because my mum and dad ...
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This is my Chapter Chat this week. I did a wanted poster for kissing Kate. I put a lot of effort into my post this week and I loved do...
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This is my Fab finish. I did Sunny. A Descriptive Passage and a More About Me. I think I could have done better because it was to colour ...
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Welcome, Whenua Here are some tips on what you hafto do. 1. Remember no running inside. 2. The teachers are awesome. 3. Give the teach...

Tino pai, Shiloh! Your comic strip is awesome, I love how colourful and eye catching it is. I also really like the way you have described what is happening in each scene. However, you need to make sure you go back and reread before you post as a couple sentences don't quite make sense.
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