Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Little House on the Prairie reflection

I have liked it so far there has been very cool my favourite part
was when Pa fand a friend that would halp him
build the house Ma also chrushd her foot and I hope it gets
better the sadist bit was also when ma
crushed her foot that was rely sad if that
happind to me I would cry but ma was very
very brave I also liked it when Jack came
back it was also sad when they thort he died
I am glad he did not die and that is how I                                 
thort the book so far.

3 comments:

  1. This is really cool.

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  2. Great ideas about the story, Shiloh. I really want you to focus on your proofreading next week. You need to use the tools that are available to you to make sure that the spelling is correct and you have correct sentence structure.

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