Sailors Grave beach
The sand birns my feet the
waves
are like montons
The sand is like the night sky
when you sirf your
Like a dolphin or sharks
salis grave beach is a place
For family friends and a picnic
I love Sailors grave
If I could recommend it for someone
I would recommend
For everyone I love sniffing
at Sailors grave beach it is the coolis
Beach ever
I love sailors grave beach because I have
gone there sins I was a baby and mum and I
Stuff'd together when I was a baby so I love
sailors grave beach ans when I say the waves
Are like mountains because they are wall sometimes
The sand is black the wind is strong but nothing stops
Me from loving salis grave.
A great description Shiloh. Remember that your proper nouns need to have capital letters e.g. Sailor's Grave
ReplyDeleteOk thank you I have just finished did you mane capital letter for sealers grave.=)
DeleteI like your poem and how much detail you put in.(=
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